Translation Check by Chrouya
Script: Dog Days' 08 [timed - xMyth]
Workraw: Dog Days' - 08 480 AAC

41
Yap!
{doesn't really reflect her personality. QC?}

61
Is everything okay with Hime-sama? {i have no idea why i can't use hime sama~ but well princess is ok~}
Is everything okay with the Princess?
{you can't, because of inconsistency otherwise.}

67
We played a ball game and rode on the Mercurius through the sky.{she says ball game in english here so do you think it's catch?~}{does she mean "catch ball" or did she play basketball or something? then "ball game" would be right. ball games are football, basketball, baseball}{QC decide between "catch ball" and "ball game".}{well japanese style she did say ball game in english so well it makes sense to not edit it in any way but well we can leave it alone~ i was just wondering if ball game is ok~}
We played catch ball and rode on the Mercurius through the sky.
{booru asobi is literally playing with a ball. Japanese kids usually play catch ball on playgrounds, so this is most likely the correct term}

68
But this summer we're making sure to have our morning strolls and study together at night every day. {But this summer every day we made sure the beginning and the end of each day to have a morning stroll and study together at night.}{she used yoru so well study at night is correct~}
But this summer we're making sure to have our morning strolls and evening study sessions every day. {or nightly}
{I believe a study session would be better wording for keeping the noun phrases consistant}

82
I can already write the entire hiragana chart and the entire alphabet.{kawaii accent desu~}
I can already write the entire hiragana chart and Roman alphabet.
{I'd remove any kind of ambiguity here}

108
Actually, I feel that our relationship right now is really warm and exciting. It somehow feels just nice.{To tell you the truth i feel our relationship now is really warm and exciting and somehow it feels really nice.}{tlc onegaishimasu}
In fact, I feel that our relationship right now is really warm and exciting as well. I'd like to keep it this way.
{slight change in first sentence. Change context of second sentence to liberal sense, to make it sound less awkward. Lit. "It's really nice."}

109~110
Being together is fun. We are on cloud nine!
Totally true!
{strange timing. I'd use this instead:)
Being together is fun and joy.
Don't you think?


111
Exactly. But I'm afraid that something bad might happen if I tried to change that relationship. What should I do then?{That's right,but i'm afraid that if i try and change that relationship to something else and it turns out bad what should i  do then....}
Exactly. But I'm afraid that things become awkward if I tried to change that relationship. What should I do then?
{kimazuku naru is something that turns into an awkward situation. People with relationship experience will know that feeling.}

112
{QC, would you keep "Yap" ...?}

113
Later on in Cinque's case i bet he wants to focus on athletics and his role as a Hero for a while. {TLC}{not getting this line}
Regarding Cinque, I bet he'll keep on focusing on athletics and his role as a Hero for the time being.
{From Cinque's perspective, he's not willing to change the atmosphere as well. That kind of context.}

115
And so a few years went by and I never told him about my feelings... {And so i let a few years go by and with that feeling i felt i couldn't tell him and didn't tell him that's me.}{something is missing here. TLC please}
And so a few years went by and I never and ever told him about my feelings...
{nothing really missing here. She just repeats the never telling him a second time.}

117~ 119
We are more than just childhood friends, but not quite family...{We are childhood friends but more than friends but not quite a family...}
I just get a bit of a special treatment...
The thing I was most scared of was being a third wheel when Cinque fell in love with {\i1}that{\i0} girl.
{wrong timing, timing is currently like this:}
117: We are more than just childhood friends, but not quite family. I just get a bit of a special treatment.
118: The one thing I'm most scared of...
119: ...is that I'll be the third wheel when Cinque would ever fall in love with a girl.
{note that Cinque and this girl had feelings of each other in this case}
{It's the thought that she's most scared of.}

124
You are too kind, Princess.
You are too sweet, Princess.
{this is said in positive context}

140
{sign} Galette Northeast - Near the Border Mithha Mountain
{sign} Northeast Galette - Near the Border - Mitha Mountain
{fixed the sign for easier reading experience}

151~156
{wrong timing here. This is how it is right now:}
151: But there is just a little something that bothers me. One of them was very different from the others. {not getting it. "a weird one"?}
152: She looked like a little girl. Someone who's very close to the boss rabbit. 
153: As in, a father-child relationship. {She seemed very close to the boss rabbit like a father and child relationship.}
154: However, it seems as though she's missing recently. {she seems to have disappeared from sight lately.}
155:It looks like their band split up in search of her and wandered into human settlements.
156:I wonder if that girl will lose her way in the settlements like last time.
{changed some wordings here and there. 156 was untranslated. With "like last time", I mean the case that happened 2 episodes ago.}

164
The princess' outfit and accessories are as adorable as ever.{9:48 and eyecatch}
The Princess' outfit and accessories are as adorable as ever.{9:48 and eyecatch}
{capitalised}

179
I guess I'm nervous, even if I'm only a guest here... {I still get nervous when I participate as a guest.}
I guess I still get nervous, being here only as a guest... {I still get nervous when I participate as a guest.}
{Her being just a guest is the sole reason for her nervosity. Normally, she plans her concerts herself.}

181
Or can't read the room? {if i can't read the mode?}
Or can't read the atmosphere? {if i can't read the mode?}
{Well, disregard this fix. I guess you want the generic lines out.}

215~217
{these are timed wrong: here's the solution}
215: A thief!
{this is the moment where the thief is hanging on a window, Assassin's Creed style.}
216: Transform!
{this is when he holds out his crest in front of him}
{this has the timing of Catch her!}
217: All set.
{this one has the timing of the previous Transform}

218
Hero Crystal Hero Time. {TLC}
Hero Crystal: Hero Time!
{stylishier}

226
Most likely a descendant of a cat god.
{perhaps change this to Nekogami (with TL note that it means cat god?) It's used as a name later on. Someone decide between consistency or clear definition please.}

228
Then we can't be too rough with her. {not getting it}
Then we can't be too rough on her.
{you're not planning on hurting a god, are you. That's why you can't be rough on her.}

232
Fast Wind Blade!
Silver Wind Blade!
{fuu gin ken}

240
We will make sure to bring this Neko Kami-sama safely back to Mithha. {"cat god-sama"? changed it to "Neko Kami-sama" for less retardness. change it back if you want}
We will make sure to bring this Nekogami safely back to Mitha. 
{changed to cat god for consistency with line 226. Without sama to reduce the said retardedness.}

241
Um, sorry, I'll be back in a flash.
Um, excuse me, just a moment.
{the context as if he's needing someone attention.}

243
Neko Kami-sama, this is for you. {TLC}
Nekogami-sama, please take this.
{as kanji compound, you pronounce it as nekogami (and as just one word)}

245
but I'll give it to you, Neko Kami-sama.
but I'll give it to you, Nekogami-sama.

246
Neko Kami-sama! You're not supposed to bite him!
Nekogami-sama! You're not supposed to bite it!
{her ambigious way of saying " not supposed to bite"...it's either him or it. Both are not how it's supposed to go, so pick your poison.}

247
I don't think a young, wild cat god
I don't think a young and wild local god
{definition error}

248
can understand too many words and will right now.{will is isshi but tlc please}
can understand too many words and meanings right now.
{perhaps liberally: has any means of communication right now}

====Eclair says "Indeed." here====

251~252
{timing isn't right here. One little sentence has to be switched to make it correct:}
251: I'll make sure we're on time! Get on!
252: Get on! It's the Hero Super Express Hyper Edition!

256
It was the same situation when I first met Cinque. {please confirm what she means by "situation".}
{In the first season, Cinque flew on his board next to Yukikaze (sprinting) as they first met}

268
Look forward and keep running! {"keep running"? TLC please.}
Keep looking forward while riding it! 
{hashiru is a general verb of moving/running something. Jitensha wo hashiru: riding on a bicycle. Kuruma wo hashiru: driving a car. The ambigious meaning of "running" something (or yourself.)}

280
Now please, listen to the Union Fest image song, {uhhhhh....}
Now please, listen to Union Festa's image song, 
{should be easy to understand, an image song of Union Festa (that great event)}

311
It's Galette's pride to win anything that bears the war title on it!{tlc onegai}
Bearing the name of warring upon us, it's Galette's pride to win!
{literally something like Having the title of war on our name}



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Next Episode Title: Union Festival
Next Episode Title: Union Festa